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  1. mentok

    proof read? senior mentor speech

    This section doesn't really work. You could try to rewrite it so it fits better but I think you either need to move it to a later part of your speech or cut it out.Maybe move it to after you say 'I am not going to make an empty promise', and cut out the bribing bit. How formal is this speech...
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