I did Havel, King and chucked in a bit for lincoln, overall think i went pretty good but how much did you guys answer the IN YOUR VIEW part because i didnt do too much of that :(. 5 and a bit pages overall which isnt to bad.
Thanks for the advice i realise that i really need to work on my terms as am constantly repating the same ones such as show and portray over and over again. Thanks for taking the time to read and review my work. What out of 20 do you think i would have got out of curiosity.
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I am not doing too great in english at the moment and am trying to practice writting essays in exam conditions. I am wondering if any of you have spare time can you read my in the wild essay and tell me where i am not strong enough as well as what mark it probably would get me.
Thanks...
Hey
I am not doing too great in english at the moment and am trying to practice writting essays in exam conditions. I am wondering if any of you have spare time can you read my in the wild essay and tell me where i am not strong enough as well as what mark it probably would get me.
Thanks a...
Surely somone has some opinon on my essay or tips to improve. 3 people have viewed it don't you guys have an opinon, any help or advice would be more than appreciated.
Jeff
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I have been studying speeches and decided to write a prac essay and am wondering if anyone would be kind enough to read and give me tips and possibly a mark out of 20 that i will probably get. Its attached and i think it is called SPEECHES ESSAY.
Thanks a HEAP guys
Jeff
Sounds good mate, thanks for taking time in these stressful days to try and work the stupid multifunction. How you going on your powerplay notes and work? You ready for the hsc its in less than 3 weeks!!
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Jeff
Alright so i need to work on using stronger emotive language as well as add extra information into my introduction as well as use compare the texts more and in greater dept.
Any idea what mark this would have got me out of the 20?
Thanks
Jeff
I am wondering is anyone here doing 'tiananmen Tank Man" for their supplementary text because i am considering using it. Also do you recommend learning 1 or 2 supplementary texts because my teacher said 2 but i only see 1 in majority of the past questions.
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Jeff
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I am not doing too well in english at the moment and am trying to practice writting essays in exam conditions. I am wondering if any of you have spare time can you read my in the wild essay and tell me where i am not strong enough as well as what mark it probably would get me. I have...
Hi all
I am not doing too well in english at the moment and am trying to practice writting essays in exam conditions. I am wondering if any of you have spare time can you read my in the wild essay and tell me where i am not strong enough as well as what mark it probably would get me. I have...
Woah that is some good information on Fax X, but how would you use that and link it to a question.
Also do you have any info like that on the other poems, preferably Of Eurydice and A Righteous Day.
Thanks
My legal and software class are of a pretty high standard, and my hospitality class is about average. So is it still likely or possible for me to get low-mid 80's then.
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I know i am not doing particularly well but my school rank is 16, any idea on the uai i will get?
My ranks are
Economics 37/46
English Advanced 148/158
Legal Studies 12/18
Maths 78/88
Hospitality 5/9
Software Design & Development 5/6
Thanks in advance
really have they stopped taking people..
I just sent in my form online at the hq site last week but it seems the site has crashed so i am unsure of what to do. Anyone else tried to go on the my hq site recently