kooltrainer
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Maybe im not getting the requirements for this course but i reckon my essay is really shiit ... in case u dun understand what my paragraphs are saying..
First body talks abt how Chaucer uses poem to accentuate Greed is root of all evil ..
Second body talks abt how Simple Plan uses a film to talk abt the same issue
Third body talk abt the conseuqence of greed in Pardoner
Fourth talks abt consequence of greed in Simple Plan
Fifth talks abt difference between 2 text ( inclusion of sarah women in comtemporary simple plan)
tell me if this is a crap structure or should i use something else or should i talk abt something else instead ... provide me with some feedback on how to improve and to meet the requirements for this module..
First body talks abt how Chaucer uses poem to accentuate Greed is root of all evil ..
Second body talks abt how Simple Plan uses a film to talk abt the same issue
Third body talk abt the conseuqence of greed in Pardoner
Fourth talks abt consequence of greed in Simple Plan
Fifth talks abt difference between 2 text ( inclusion of sarah women in comtemporary simple plan)
tell me if this is a crap structure or should i use something else or should i talk abt something else instead ... provide me with some feedback on how to improve and to meet the requirements for this module..
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