Ok so i need some help with my english speech about protest. my chosen topic is the paris agreement.
specifically, the assignment says
"You have been chosen to deliver a presentation to UN Youth Australia in which you protest about an issue or situation in the world that requires urgent action"
the things i have to include are:
>the issue and information on why its serious
>the significance of the issue
>expressing personal feelings and why it matters to me
>suggestions of solutions to help alleviate the issue
>engaging and persuading the audience
i have 2.5-3.5 mins to speak, and i ideally want somewhere between 400-450 words but i went overboard and wrote 514 words. not sure what i should cut or how i can cut
any and all constructive criticism is appreciated
thanks in advance!
specifically, the assignment says
"You have been chosen to deliver a presentation to UN Youth Australia in which you protest about an issue or situation in the world that requires urgent action"
the things i have to include are:
>the issue and information on why its serious
>the significance of the issue
>expressing personal feelings and why it matters to me
>suggestions of solutions to help alleviate the issue
>engaging and persuading the audience
i have 2.5-3.5 mins to speak, and i ideally want somewhere between 400-450 words but i went overboard and wrote 514 words. not sure what i should cut or how i can cut
any and all constructive criticism is appreciated
thanks in advance!
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