Hi there.
I have to write some PEEL paragraphs for an evaluation of responses in the Caroline Byrne case -- if anybody is unfamiliar, you should look at it. It's really quite an interesting case, and my opinion on Godron Wood's guilt changes a lot.
I am aware of what the criteria mean, however, I'm struggling to select ones to write about as I'm not totally sure how to produce A-level essay paragraphs evaluating these criteria -- my worry is writing unrelated things or rambling nonsense that doesn't make sense.
As a reminder, here are the criteria mentioned in the preliminary course syllabus:
My legal studies teacher highlighted protection of individual rights, meeting society's needs, and application of the rule of law as suitable criteria and she provided us with exemplary A, B, and C-level paragraphs for the protection of individual rights criteria. I managed to write a paragraph for that same criteria, as well as one for accessibility of non-legal responses such as the media impeding the achievement of justice for all parties involved. But, I don't know how to talk about the other two, or any of the others in relation to this issue.
Any help or ideas in relation to how to talk about any of these criteria?
Thanks a lot.
I have to write some PEEL paragraphs for an evaluation of responses in the Caroline Byrne case -- if anybody is unfamiliar, you should look at it. It's really quite an interesting case, and my opinion on Godron Wood's guilt changes a lot.
I am aware of what the criteria mean, however, I'm struggling to select ones to write about as I'm not totally sure how to produce A-level essay paragraphs evaluating these criteria -- my worry is writing unrelated things or rambling nonsense that doesn't make sense.
As a reminder, here are the criteria mentioned in the preliminary course syllabus:
- Resource efficiency
- Accessibility
- Enforceability
- Responsiveness
- Protection of individual rights
- Meeting society's needs
- Application of the rule of law
- Has justice been achieved?
My legal studies teacher highlighted protection of individual rights, meeting society's needs, and application of the rule of law as suitable criteria and she provided us with exemplary A, B, and C-level paragraphs for the protection of individual rights criteria. I managed to write a paragraph for that same criteria, as well as one for accessibility of non-legal responses such as the media impeding the achievement of justice for all parties involved. But, I don't know how to talk about the other two, or any of the others in relation to this issue.
Any help or ideas in relation to how to talk about any of these criteria?
Thanks a lot.