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Hsc half yearlies in 3 days, PLEASE HELP (1 Viewer)

sixpaths97

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Got english hsc half yearly examination in 3 days and got no idea how to write an english essay based on the crucible.

The question is Connecting with others is the cornerstone of personal contentment.

Need to use the crucible, and two related text to form an essay.
the thing is i cant think of any ideas for this and how to structure out my paragraphs. I know T.E.E.L and stuff
but i dont know what to write and what quotes to use please help ASAP . Stressin hard.
 

RivalryofTroll

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Didn't do the Crucible (I did Skrzynecki) but...

Looking at the question, you can probably approach it in 3 ways (or more):
- Agree - my texts have shown that connecting with others has resulted in personal satisfaction.
- Agree - my texts have shown that NOT connecting with others has resulted in personal dissatisfaction.
- Disagree - my texts have shown that connecting with others does not necessarily lead to personal satisfaction.

Structuring it... a possible structure:

Body 1 - Crucible 1
Body 2 - Related 1
Body 3 - Crucible 2
Body 4 - Related 2

You can't expect BoS to feed you with ''what quotes to use'' or ''what to write'' specifically. You'll have to figure it out yourself through collecting quotes, techniques and textual evidence.
 

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