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Hi ppl, I'm currently at the production stage of my Major the opic being Joan of Arc... I've done an extensive amount of research but I'm not too confident with my question or how I can go about putting this essay into motion below is my question.. I'd muchly appreciate any suggestions on how to improve it

Assess the impact of Joan of Arc’s legacy, how subsequent political and military bodies to serve their own ends and how this differs from her historical interpretation.
 
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howaboutthis? said:
Hi ppl, I'm currently at the production stage of my Major the opic being Joan of Arc... I've done an extensive amount of research but I'm not too confident with my question or how I can go about putting this essay into motion below is my question.. I'd muchly appreciate any suggestions on how to improve it

Assess the impact of Joan of Arc’s legacy, how subsequent political and military bodies to serve their own ends and how this differs from her historical interpretation.
Very clunky - you have three parts which aren't attached very well. I'd make it shorter and with more flair. Something like:

Joan of Arc's legacy: Military service versus historical methodology.
 

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