panicatthehsc
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Hey guys!
For my AOS essay I have to look at The Tempest. I'm a bit confused about how to set out the ideas in my body paragraphs. I'm not 100% sure how to describe my question, but I'll take the example of one of the ideas in The Tempest.
So - if I was to write a body paragraph about the way that discovering something for the first time can change people's perceptions of themselves and others, could I choose to write about Miranda's discovery of love for the first time and just elaborate on that throughout the paragraph or would I choose several different examples - Miranda and love, Caliban's humanity, Prospero and revenge...?
I'm really struggling to get some strong detailed points on the text so any help would be much appreciated.
For my AOS essay I have to look at The Tempest. I'm a bit confused about how to set out the ideas in my body paragraphs. I'm not 100% sure how to describe my question, but I'll take the example of one of the ideas in The Tempest.
So - if I was to write a body paragraph about the way that discovering something for the first time can change people's perceptions of themselves and others, could I choose to write about Miranda's discovery of love for the first time and just elaborate on that throughout the paragraph or would I choose several different examples - Miranda and love, Caliban's humanity, Prospero and revenge...?
I'm really struggling to get some strong detailed points on the text so any help would be much appreciated.