structures!! for the AOS (1 Viewer)

[craziigal]

for the AOS paper 1 the part where we use our stimulus booklet, class text and a related text...how is the structure suppose to be like when we construct our essay for each paragraph?

is it intro.. paragraph 1.. concept of journey, relate to most/all of ur texts..
paragraph 2.. another concept of journey, relate again..
etc etc
conclusion...


or is it intro paragraph 1 .. relate to class + stimulus text discussing about a concept of journey.
paragraph 2.. relate to related + stimulus text discussing again?

ACTULI WAT DO U WRITE IN EACH PARAGRAPH?

 

[hopeles5ly]

There is actually no set way in how you structure the essay, but here are some suggestions: http://community.boredofstudies.org...ou-structure-aos-essay-hsc-rmaterial-all.html

 

[glitterfairy]

I was told once that ideally you should integrate ALL your texts within each paragraph (ie being able to link all of them to strong concepts) however it's difficult to do that AND cover the texts in relative depth.

Failing that, you should try to look at two texts per paragraph (and your journey, of course ). It doesn't matter what order you bring the texts in provided you cover them ALL in roughly equal depth - and - (most importantly) have a nice strong argument.