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[Evansy]

i wrote this a while ago, and now i want to seriously find out what people think of my work. please let me know
so here it is
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My heart is cold
it switched off a day ago
im lying here freezing
as my body slowly dies
before i know it
my eyes are shut
forever gone
with no life left at all
im drifing out of this world
floating into the afterlife
where ever that may be
i dont know
but atleast i know
that i no longer have
to wait to see the end
which i have destin to reach
riight from the begining of time...

 

[jumb]

You mean destined?

 

[Evansy]

other than my spelling mistakes, wat do u guys think

 

[soha]

yeah i think its good
nice work...could prolly fix it up a bit
but i like it...

 

[breaking]

emo

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