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The structure I'm following is

Intro
Paragraph 1: Text 1
Paragraph 2: Text 2
Paragraph 3: Text 1
Paragraph 4: Text 2
Paragraph 5: Text 1
Paragraph 6: Text 2
Conclusion

1) is that too many paragraphs

2) How many quotes should I use per paragraph

3) How many words should I have in each body
 

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1) Depends how fast you can write
2) 3-4 at the minimum
3) Depends. Try timing yourself and see how many words in total you can write in 40 minutes.
 

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Paragraph 1: Intro
Paragraph 2: Text 1
Paragraph 3: Text 2
Paragraph 4: Text 1
Paragraph 5: Text 2
Paragraph 6: Conclusion
Word Count: ~ 900
 

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13.5/15 HSC structure

Paragraph 1: Intro
Paragraph 2: Text 1
Paragraph 3: Text 2
Paragraph 4: Text 1
Paragraph 5: Text 2
Paragraph 6: Conclusion
Word Count: ~ 900
Apparently you need to have 6 body paragraphs, 2 per idea


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1) Depends how fast you can write
2) 3-4 at the minimum
3) Depends. Try timing yourself and see how many words in total you can write in 40 minutes.
I have 4 quotes per paragraph so I should be fine, and is there a thread specifically on how to answer English essay questions


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13.5/15 HSC structure

Paragraph 1: Intro
Paragraph 2: Text 1
Paragraph 3: Text 2
Paragraph 4: Text 1
Paragraph 5: Text 2
Paragraph 6: Conclusion
Word Count: ~ 900
I do that most of the time. I would like 6 bodies but realistically if I want detailed paragraphs under strong points I can only do 4 bodies

Btw, is there any uploaded sample essays following this structure? All I've seen so far are 3 bodies
 
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Apparently you need to have 6 body paragraphs, 2 per idea


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This is what I got for the 2014 hsc, only had 4 bodies, 2 ideas in total.

I do that most of the time. I would like 6 bodies but realistically if I want detailed paragraphs under strong points I can only do 4 bodies

Btw, is there any uploaded sample essays following this structure? All I've seen so far are 3 bodies
I will be sharing it soon :)
 

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It's too many. Just do what photastic recommended. That way you can delve deeper into each idea and provide an insightful argument for each rather than briefly discussing stuff. Also, you need time to adapt it to the question.
 

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Paragraph 1: Intro
Paragraph 2: Text 1
Paragraph 3: Text 2
Paragraph 4: Text 1
Paragraph 5: Text 2
Paragraph 6: Conclusion
Word Count: ~ 900
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Do you have an example essay?
 

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It's too many. Just do what photastic recommended. That way you can delve deeper into each idea and provide an insightful argument for each rather than briefly discussing stuff. Also, you need time to adapt it to the question.
Yeah 2015's listen to enigma as well, don't argue with band 6 students. At the end of the day, if you answered the question and succeeded the marking criteria you are going to do well.

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Do you have an example essay?
I am re typing my essay I received from my paper last year.
 

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