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Thank you, my teacher gave me feedback saying that the story has no major issues and the chicken killing part didn't work. I will try to incorporate all the feedback I have been given.

Somewhat I guess I included aspects of the prompt into my story like the protagonist being materialistic, shadowed by melancholy due to the murder. In a conceptual level it was more so about what distinguishes a human between an animal, as animals do sometimes eat their own relatives or offspring.

This is my first draft of the entire story He was a murderer. A regretful act changed his feelings, it all began when he was a young boy, when he was surrounded by lush golden wheat fields, at which his father worked. His house adjoined the field, it was nothing but shameful. The walls were...

Yep, I think the story will make more sense after I finish it, I was advised by someone to describe more actually.

The prompt was This is not written for the young or the light of heart, not for the tranquil species of men whose souls are content with the simple pleasures…. Rather, I write to those beings like myself whose existence is compounded by a lurid intermingling of the dark and the light; who feel...

Could you give feedback on my essay so far He was a murderer. A regretful act changed his feelings, it all began when he was a young boy, when he was surrounded by lush golden wheat fields, at which his father worked. His house adjoined the field, it was nothing but shameful. The walls were...

I need to write a gothic short story, due on 22nd March and haven't started need help.

yo, kinda of going off topic, how do I get good in eng ext 1, I am in year 11 and got c in year 10 cuz I didn't try and had around 60 percent attendance. I want to get e4 in eng ext 1 so I can choose eng ext 2, how do I get better?

I have to 4u maths though, if I want to apply to the uk lol.

I like English although I am not good at it.

I wont miss my friends, but I believe I will have a blast in the US or Uk and make better quality and intellectual friends.

I want to study Technology and Management at oxford and something similar in the USA or London.

https://boredofstudies.org/threads/tips-for-applying-into-overseas-unis-like-oxford-or-cambridge.393732/#post-7360994 This is the link

I do have another form, The main reason I need a 99 ATAR to apply overseas to study technology and management.

I am planning to do maths ext 2 for year 12

I am doing maths and eng ext 1, business studies, physics, Economics

Also how many band 6s would I need?

Yes that is why I chose the username, and also 1st in every subject in my cohort right? I am planning on to move to a private school that is ranked in the 100s what about then

As I have mentioned I really need a 99 atar to get into the uni that I am passionate about, I have just started year 11 and am willing to work as hard as it takes, and would like guidance on how to study, how many hours and anything that can help me get the 99 atar. I am doing eng and maths ext...

My parents are somewhat able to support me.