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Well I've written another version of my previous essay on 'Frontline' from the 2004 HSC question. I hope this is a better version. Please give me a mark out of 20 and tell me why. Thankyou!

For the actual HSC score, how much is the Area of Study and the Modules worth? I've heard two versions. One of them is that the Area of Study counts for 50% of the HSC score, while the Modules count for the other 50%. But I've also heard that the Area of Study counts for 25% and the Modules...

Does ANYONE do WUTHERING HEIGHTS or DID wuthering heights last year???????? It seems we're the only class in the WHOLE OF AUSTRALIA doing WUthering HEIGHTS!!!! I NEED SOMEONE TO GIVE ME FEEDBACK!!! PLEASEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! This essay was from 2004 HSC Q. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, I need...

can you read the rest please? I want to make it as good as i can, cos then i can move on to another practice essay on Hamlet + ros and Guil

This is really helpful. Don't stop. I need someone really critical or I will never improve. Don't be nice, be HONEST.

Changed Essay (Hopefully for the better) This is the new version of my previous practice essay. I hope its better. If not, please tell me what is wrong with it and how I can improve, or what mistakes I'm repeating. and please give me another mark out of 20. Thankyou!

This is my practice essay on Wuthering Heights from the 2004 HSC question. It took me about 38 minutes to write and I'd really appreciate it if I could get some feedback on what's wrong with it and how I can improve it. And please give me a mark out of 20. Thankyou!

So mainly, I have to: * Address the question * Stick to the point and not go off on tangents * create more flow within my essay * Add more information on techniques I'm finding it hard to incorporate techniques. Maybe I should write a different version of this essay and post it again...

Hey people, I've just finished an practice essay on Imaginative Journey from the 2004 HSC paper and I would like some feedback please. It took me 42 minutes to write this so I say I was within time limit. Be honest and tell me what's wrong with it and how I can improve it, and please give me...

I've just written a practice essay on "Frontline" from the 2004 HSC paper question. I would really appreciate it if i could get some feedback on this, like what's wrong with it and most importantly how I can improve it. Please also give me a mark out of 20. Thankyou!

I would really like some feedback on this essay on transformation. I used the question from last year's HSC paper on Transformation and I'd really like some feedback as Module A is my worst out of the three. It took me 41 minutes to write this essay. I would really appreciate any comments on...

Is there any other chemical additives in water other than chlorine, monochloramine and flouride? If so could you please tell me as I desperately need to find some chemical additives in water.

But isn't that just demonstrating the principles of an Induction Motor and not an actual working model?

People I need help!!! I need to write a PLAN that would enable me to choose equipment or resources to SET UP/BUILD/CONSTRUCT a WORKING MODEL of an INDUCTION MOTOR in the LAB or at HOME. Please give me some suggestions. It will be greatly appreciated as I cannot find anything.

duuuuuuuuuuuudes i've got a problem with this question. It was a past half yearly question. a) Discuss why it is important to have an ELECTROMAGNET as opposed to a permanent magnet creating a magnetic field in an INDUCTION MOTOR b) How does this magnetic field cause rotation? c)...

is there anythin on ADVANTAGES OF DC generators?

i'm desperate for some DISADVANTAGES of AC and ADVATNAGES of DC generators i've got too much on advantages of AC and disadvantages of DC, so could anyone please help me out with the above ones. PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!