MaryJane said:
melsc, I can see why you'd be disappointed re: not realistic enough.. then again I think thats what the essay was about, pragmatic solutions (I could be wrong, and am completely going off memory though). I nearly fell into that trap a few times while writing it, but told myself off... Not that I did great in the end, either.
Re: referencing lectures, never do it. Ever. Not sure why they are so against referencing lectures, but all units I've ever done have explicitly made post-essay comments about people who reference lectures. I think the problem is that they are a transient source and therefore not a scholarly source. I agree that its a bit annoying, especially when they say things that are directly relevant and then you cant find a quote for it anywhere in any of your research.
Yeah, I don't think I realised (or it was clear enough to me) that it supposed to be that pragmatic. In my mind I was trying to be realistic...I know for next time at least. I do see how I was a little confused and tangental but I still feel it was relevant enough for a pass. I suppose I saw the question broadly and then took a narrow focus that wasn;t in the direction they wanted.
My friend and I who are both third years and this is our first elective both realised that we did not exactly what was expected as we are used to core units were its more knowledge and skills based rather than research and based. At the very least we know what to do now and he did say I should be able to turn my marks around (probably not as much as I'd like).
With referencing lectures, again I'll put it down to experience because I have never had anyone complain about it before (as you said I usually only use it when I can't find it anywhere else) but I haven't done a subject at this level so again its something I can take on board.
Anyone who passed can you tell me how many sources you used and what yous solutions were so I can get an idea what I did wrong.
I had about 7 sources (I read more but they were irelevant so I did not include them in bibliography). My strategies were:
1. Embracing current standards and simple things to induce compliance. Media enforcing compliance by bring issue to light. Ensuring people understand the current level of compliance and how coverage is generally of the few failures (a few other things I cant remember).
2. Finanical reform of un - trying to promoted awareness of limited resources. Either accept current levels of compliance or increase funding by creating better sanctions for those who fail to pay (like the US) so the UN has money to do things and increase legitimacy.
3. restructure of SC - allocate six permenant seats attached to regions in the world with rotating membership to increase legitimacy and relevance. Would be better to give them veto but unlikely to happen so limit use of veto by permenant members or make them justify it to general assembly which may lead to eventual phasing out.
I acknowledged with all these the difficulties they faced but noted that most of these hadn't been proposed for 10 years and times have changed as and the frustration with the current system increased blah blah blah...
Re: class participation.
Rafiq warned me that he will allocate the marks the way G2G said (he was telling me so I could try and maximise the marks I have left to get) and that those people he keeps asking questions and they fail to answer (like those people he pointed to in the back of las class) he is trying to get an answer out of them because he suspects they are unpreparedand when they don't answer that affirms it. he said make sure you ask questions and they are relevant and show evidence you understand the topic.
I would make sure you try and answer/ask early on anything you know something about! Although i believe the reason why no one talks is because he doesn't have tutorial questions or anything to go by and expects us to come up with questions. But if you understood everything or are trying to digest all the info...what are you going to ask?
I just hope I can try and keep my GPA up and try not to fail...