BOS Showcase: 2006 Major Works (2 Viewers)

[cooki]

i did poetry. mines called 'Raw: Storms in My Head' If you would like to read it, please give me your email and i'll send it to you. I really would like feedback, but i don't know whether you would want to read morbid and depressing poems.

Flirter off echild? Oo..trust a raver to write angst...eep.

 

[flirter_988]

Flirter off echild? Oo..trust a raver to write angst...eep.

haha, i was full of angst before i was a raver plus i don't rave much anymore

how have you been nat? long time no see.

 

[cooki]

haha, i was full of angst before i was a raver plus i don't rave much anymore

how have you been nat? long time no see.

Ohh did that come across as rude? i didnt mean to..

mine is pretty angsty..email to me kinkicooki@hotmail.com

u can download mine from the links i posted above...enjoy

 

[frankyd]

Haha, you fag. Don't pretend you haven't heard it before...xoxo LUV U LONG TIME AND SHIZ LOLZER

lol this is why i luv u kabakournakovavic.. really an inside joke haha

 

[courtneyrobbo]

hey it says ive got 22 views....somebody give me feedback pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!!!!!!!

 

[courtneyrobbo]

Lol good point. But i have no idea how my ext 2 will go, either way......do im desperate for some!!! i havent embedded too much of an ego in ext 2...it was kinda my half assed subject to a degree....i dont no ne1 else that was like that! anyone please, feedback me....good or bad !!

 

[dasphoebus]

Ok, here is mine.

Title: GigaCorp
Medium: Short Story

I have a feeling you will need to read the reflection statement. I don't know really, but some fools still have trouble understanding what I'm on about.

It's doubleplusgood.

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P.S. If you find spelling errors or anything of the sort, don't tell me.

 

[shimmy&shine]

Good god, please don't remind me about errors.

I keep rereading my major work, and I have found around 5 mistakes, and it's really irritating because I can't do anything to change them.

Though the hilarious thing is that they are so so miniscule. But nevertheless still bug the hell out of me.

LottoX, you want feedback? IT WAS CRAP!!

no, really


nah, I'm kidding, don't cry, lol.

 

[NobodyKnows]

Oh man, you guys are all so brilliantly talented and I'm so crap!! I did my Refl. soooo wrong....

 

[dasphoebus]

Oh man, you guys are all so brilliantly talented and I'm so crap!! I did my Refl. soooo wrong....

It's alright. I had to redraft it five times before it was considered acceptable. Even then, I now realise I've missed some serious points.

 

[Tulipa]

I said I didn't want feedback. Oh well. TIME TO CRY!!

no, really


nah, I'm kidding, im not crying, lol.

i've actually started sifting through yours LottoX, looks like it will be quite interesting.

and shimmy&shine i'd love to read yours.

katykins is quite interesting as well, a very cohesive style of poetry.

(as you can see i'm only really reading the poetry pieces )

 

[courtneyrobbo]

Naaw....im new to these forums but noone wants to read my crappy critical response and give me crappy feedback lol.....hey its about poetry is that helps???? lol

 

[shimmy&shine]

Everyone's a poetry-lover.
I'll read yours courtney, when I have some time (still in my trials).

I don't know why, but I feel hesitant to post up my major work. Can't really pin-point a reason, I dunno. It's not because I'm obssessed, or proud of it or anything. Maybe I'm afraid of opinions and feedback, and someone going 'that's shit'. If you really want to read something, I'll post up my reflection statement.

eek! sorry.

I read Katykin's too, it was intersting, I'm amazed how she handled such a delicate subject so well.

 

[HinikuTheNinja]

Dawww. I'm still unsure about mine. I think I like it, but at the same time, I'm not too sure. Oh well.

Genre: Short Story
Title: Schrodinger's Cat

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Kekeke. Oh. Um. Beware sex, violence and a singular obscenity. Wootwoot.

BTW, Lord Pheasant? T__T I hate you. Yours is so good. *cries*

 

[dasphoebus]

Everyone's a poetry-lover.

That is debatable. Mostly by me.

Sorry poetry people, but I have hated both units of poetry with a passion.

 

[courtneyrobbo]

thanks shimmy&shine, id appreciate it very much but u must let us do the same! dont be hesitant, share the love! if ur aimin for a UAI of 98 i dont think u would let urself produce a mediocre work...please, id love to read it (by the way my reflec statement was done night before)

 

[case88]

just read your work, courtneyrobbo. i liked it overall: very interesting content. i did think that there were some fallbacks in the language/register though... sometimes it was entirely playful and appropriate for the feature article format; however, at other times it was sort of formal and highly analytical. that's not to say that it wasn't written well... it was just hard to pinpoint which form you were more keen on employing. anyway, i had a great time reading it, and i'm sure the marker will be v. impressed too.

 

[cooki]

Could someone please read mine im really egaer for feedback as i want ot keep working on it out of school...

i posted the links on page 2...plz plz pretty please with a cherry on top

- ta

 

[jhakka]

heres mine:
poetry, "Slivers"

having problems uploading here.. just follow the link below. its only available for seven days though.. could a mod d/l it from here and edit my post with the attatchment?? if not, dont worry about it! enjoyy!!

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=01E7983843C511A7

I just had a look at the file, and some of the documents in your zip are too big to upload here.

 

[renton]

oi hiniku, just checked out your work, its 10 000 words. probly good but wats up with the word count