word of warning (if u weren't already aware):
AVOID WRITING ABOUT ANGSTY TEENAGE SHIT or overdoses, suicide, abuse etc
and NEVER end with 'and then they woke up'
an endless number of students do that every year, and markers dont appreciate it.
you want your story to be different in some way, stand out, make it unique and you'll get those marks.
...this advice has been drilled into my head by my english teacher who's been a hsc marker for 4 years and sick of reading the same shit over and over again