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LostAuzzie

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Hi all this is an essay I wrote, in 40 mins, answering the CSSA Trial Question:
Could someone take a look, comment and give a mark out of 15.
 

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too short, at my school you'd get 7/15
but they mark it pretty hard...
dunno how easy BOS marks it
 

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I'm not game to give you a mark (I don't do Coleridge!)... but I don't think its too short.
 

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I don't think I'd really be qualified to give it a mark, but I would say it's a little short. I also do Coleridge and as it's the prescribed text, you have to go into it in quite a lot of detail, my teacher suggests we do two of his poems well rather than more in less detail.
 

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7/15.. you are suppose to balance your texts, half the techniques don't even asnwer the question either.
 

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