I've just got a small query: if including the 'Hajj' as a method to gain inner peace for Muslims, would be a suitable example for a high mark response (out of 20 marks). I am analysing the five pillars of faith, with an indepth discussion on daily prayer and hajj, except not all Muslims embark on the Hajj, so I thought that the examiners might consider it to be a weak example. I'm thinking of changing to 'Fasting' if you guys think that that is a better/stronger example.