raekwon
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are you meant to include all the texts you are going to talk about in the intro? for eg..
"as demonstrated in "prize giving" and "the glass jar" by gwen harwood, "the door" by miroslav holub, "additional text 1" by blah and "additional text 2" by blah blah, it can be seen that..."
or
"as demonstrated in two poems by harwood, a poem by Miroslav Holub, a cartoon by blah and a movie by blah, it can be seen that..."
or simply
"as demonstrated in a number of texts from a variety of mediums, it can be seen that..."
what do you guys reckon?
"as demonstrated in "prize giving" and "the glass jar" by gwen harwood, "the door" by miroslav holub, "additional text 1" by blah and "additional text 2" by blah blah, it can be seen that..."
or
"as demonstrated in two poems by harwood, a poem by Miroslav Holub, a cartoon by blah and a movie by blah, it can be seen that..."
or simply
"as demonstrated in a number of texts from a variety of mediums, it can be seen that..."
what do you guys reckon?