My Eco Essays - Plz Gimme some feedbackz~ (1 Viewer)

[MoonLiteDreamz]

One is on fiscal and the other is on macroeconomic policies. Plz gimme some advise and how I can improve. thanku!

 

[P_Dilemma]

The second essay seems ok, quite a bit of detail, but might want to expand a little.

What happened to the first essay?!? half of it is missing!

-P_D

 

[MoonLiteDreamz]

The second essay seems ok, quite a bit of detail, but might want to expand a little.

What happened to the first essay?!? half of it is missing!

-P_D

Oh really? Maybe I sent the wrong file. can u try this one?!

And Thanks for your previous feedback. but can u tell me where should I expand?

 

[gnrlies]

Heres some feedback on one of em

 

[gnrlies]

had a look at the other one

Try n wack some theory. A graph or a model to demonstrate what you are saying.

And by model I mean an equation such as (AD = C+i+g+x-m)

 

[MoonLiteDreamz]

I see. I'll have look at the feedback and put more theory and equations and graphs where possible. thanks heaps guys ^_^

 

[nickyroony]

I think you go too much into describing, while the questions asked in extended responses are usually Discuss or Analyse questions.

Just from the top of my head:
1. Maybe mention that though fiscal policy is a macro policy because of the budget outcome (surplus etc), its components are essentially micro (allocation of resources)

2. Multiplier effect - how increase in spending can be multiplied through the economy, thus generating more economic activity if the government inject more funds.

3. You should always try to discuss the limitations of the policy. For fiscal, of course that would be political objectives and that it can't really respond readily like monetary policy to changes in economic conditions because it's used annually by the Federal budget.

That's just my opinion anyway ^^ Good luck!

 

[TABismyfuture]

My teacher said NO DOT POINTs!