hey come off it guys! I'm doing leaving home for one of my poems and I reckon helping out might help me study too (having a bit of touble concentrating, know the feeling anyone??)
so yeah
* tone change from realism to surrealism occurs at "watching myself outside in the rain"
* allusion to Publius Skippio (def. Hannibal)- skrzynecki is saying that he will not see the beaurocrats again unless he can defeat them
* skrzynecki feels that he doesn't have any choice but to leave home to go to his teaching job. He is unaware that he actaully does have a choice "our dull witted, frog mouthed obedience to the letter of the law" because his family are migrants and they aren't up to speed on what's going on
* repetition of "three" as he is thinking constantly of his family (himself and his two parents)
*use of black comedy "the millionth person that couldn't pronounce my name"
* Nightmarish imagery "three headless crows flying in a room whose walls were silently burning", "bald toothless faces standing at a window, laughing in the rain"
and that's just a start! Hope it helps. Good luck with the exam guys!