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Please help me with cutting this assignment downn (1 Viewer)

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lilsxcwog69

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What are human rights (5 marks)
What is the most effective method of protecting human rights (15 marks)
No more than 600 words for both of these answers combined
My answers to the are too long.
any thoughts on cutting it down



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goan_crazy

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Elias, as I've told you already
you need to cut it down yourself
only you know what is relevant and what is not
no one else can do that for you
another bit of advice, I don't think it was a good idea posting up your assignment on here before it is due. Anyone from your class or whatever could plagarise it and then you'll be in trouble. And also, your teacher may see as teachers browse these forums.
But just some advice, cut down from your 2nd one
your first one seems ok but your 2nd is 523 words
your aim is to get that one down to about half it is at the moment
good luck:)
 
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Ive already cut down question (b) as much by getting rid of other protection methods, so when I get back to school I'll get the teachers advice then work from there cause its due a week after school commences.
 

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I hated this I was once double the word limit...

You just need to grint your teeth and try and cut as much as you can. each time you will get rid of the stuff that isnt that important. Check to see if you have said the same thing twice or in a confusing long way...

Good Luck...I am not very good at this...
 

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