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[Sweets]

^^^ Your story sounds great.

Mine was ok, I used the hands one. I'm expecting 12-13. I killed the other two sections though so its ok.

 

[holla back girl]

How do you know that? I just treated it as a young boy holding his fathers hand, hope i don't get marked down cause BOS is too stingy to print in colour.

know what?
whether it was a girl or not?
no...you can't tell...you can assume and make ur own judgement

and whether the child was black? she's not
i think you can tell...the hand was much lighter than the adults..

 

[holla back girl]

How do you know that? I just treated it as a young boy holding his fathers hand, hope i don't get marked down cause BOS is too stingy to print in colour.

know what?
whether it was a girl or not?
no...you can't tell...you can assume and make ur own judgement

and whether the child was black? she's not
i think you can tell...the hand was much lighter than the adults..

 

[7th Sign]

guys did you name your story???

sort of I just used the title "The Detour That Changed My Life" or something.

 

[holla back girl]

How do you know that? I just treated it as a young boy holding his fathers hand, hope i don't get marked down cause BOS is too stingy to print in colour.

know what?
whether it was a girl or not?
no...you can't tell...you can assume and make ur own judgement

and whether the child was black? she's not
i think you can tell...the hand was much lighter than the adults..

 

[boite nature]

i used the detour sign. lovely little story about a single mum and her daughter driving out in the middle of nowhere and the kid needed to go to the toilet. there was a lot more to it than that but lets just leave it there.
how much did u guys plan yours? I created about 4 characters beforehand and then just picked one and made up a story about her to do with the sign...

 

[youarefree]

Letter?

I wrote a letter for section 2- 5 pages I think.

Was I supposed to do a short story??....I'm freaking out now...

Because it said "imaginative"...

Oh crap...

 

[stace0101]

I chose the first one with the caterpillar and the quote. Wrote 7 pages. Mine was sorta like 2 stories that came together at the end, best creative writing i've ever done!! i hope...

 

[Firnovvwen]

I thought the creative piece was good, 'coz it had a lot images to choose from.

I used the hands as well, but I used the child's hand as my own when my father was holding my hand and was saying it was alright when my mother died. I then changed it around, and it was me who was holding my fathers hand as I was saying it was alright when we walked up the Sydney Harbour Bridge.

I almost cried when I was writing this, 'coz it's half true.

Did anyone get that other hand picture, where it had the eye in the middle? I so didn't understand that image...

 

[drunk_polly]

guys did you name your story???

 

[arooshika...]

i used the windmill bit one...i planned my story before hand, i just chucked the windmill in there

 

[koopatrooper]

i did that whats it called, the two hands, i interpreted it as the aging process so i did a story about an old guy remembering his life then he died. *tear* hahaha.

 

[arooshika...]

guys did you name your story???

shit...i forgot to name it....oh well

 

[drunk_polly]

damn man.. im kicking myself..
1. i didnt name the god damn thing
2. it was too short

 

[DistantCube]

I used the unusual journey one. I gave a title to the story, I thought you were meant to.

 

[youarefree]

BTW did anybody NOT do a story?

I didnt- i did a letter...

am shitting myself cos sounds like everyone did a short story...

someone please say its ok to do a letter...

 

[Firnovvwen]

I tried to name mine, but I drew an mental black, realised I had 10 mins to go and still Section 1 to finish.

Used the hands one.

 

[jimjim]

know what?
whether it was a girl or not?
no...you can't tell...you can assume and make ur own judgement

and whether the child was black? she's not
i think you can tell...the hand was much lighter than the adults..

i think you'll find that's because of the lighting.. still, who cares?! i doubt the colour really matters to ur mark! im sure u still did really well!

 

[koopatrooper]

we had to name it? shaiza.

 

[SiReN]

i used the 'unusual journey' and so i named my story that!,preety dodge ahhwell..