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Tieing the points together - HELP (1 Viewer)

MattBaker

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I'm really dumbfounded how to do this in an essay. I've got four sources of material (My Place, the Road Not Taken, Grave of the Fireflies and Shawshank Redemption) yet I cannot figure out how to fit this into an essay. Do I write a paragraph about one, then go onto another paragraph about the other, or do I fit similar point about each into a single paragraph

Help greatly needed :confused:
 

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Would it be a good idea to use the Road Not Taken as a sort of linking point between each of the texts for example, I can show how each of the texts have their protagonists choosing a certain "road" which makes "all the difference" (for better or worse).
 

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You have to have theses eg all journeys come to an end, inner journeys are closely linked with physical journeys... have a look in the faq for more examples i think...

Tie at least 2 texts together with a thesis statement as the opening sentence then talk about first text, then second text linking it back to the first and repeat :)

That's what i do anyway
 

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