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Using the word "belonging" for AOS creative ? (1 Viewer)

luvtads

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Hi,

Is it ok to use the word "belonging" for AOS creative writing ?
 

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markers already know the topic that you're writing about. no need to slap them in the face with the word belonging a trillion times.
 

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In all seriousness, repeating 'belonging' in no way answers the question and probably indicates a lack of substance/understanding of the topic. You shouldn't need to use it very often and it's probably best to avoid it.
 

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Key word: Creative

This applies to your language as well.
 

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Nah - you are allowed to use it. Teachers often frown upon it, though, to prevent kids from using it every second sentence. So use it, but only when you need to. :)
 

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As Aerath said, use it only when you need to. However, I strongly suggest you using it because then you're making the belonging aspect of it super, super obvious which teachers pretty much hate.

Even for my essays, I usually only use it in my introduction and possibly my conclusion if i'm in the mood XD
 

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