ookkk lol arrr yer i thought so ill cut some out! Im doing the impact of fashion on youths and i got heaps of crap about the history i think ill cut some of that out. So r u doing a pip 2 ? in mine i talk about Erik Erikson 4 obvious reasons, like why people chose the clothing they choose etc etc.noir. said:you need to cut yer central material down to a max of 5000 words you crazy lady
And make your font smaller to a 12.
dont listen to your teacher.
cut the crap (if there is any) and if there isnt, cut stuff you've repeated
Yes yes i am doing the PIP.sophie1989 said:ookkk lol arrr yer i thought so ill cut some out! Im doing the impact of fashion on youths and i got heaps of crap about the history i think ill cut some of that out. So r u doing a pip 2 ? in mine i talk about Erik Erikson 4 obvious reasons, like why people chose the clothing they choose etc etc.
this is my contents page:noir. said:Yes yes i am doing the PIP.
What other things have you talked about? some of it may not be relevant
And yeh 9 months to work on it... It should be worth more than 30%
Sophie, thats a huge contents pagesophie1989 said:this is my contents page:
Intro
log
central material:
what is fashion?
History of fashion
peer pressure and fashion
social aspects of clothing
clothes seperate people into groups
is fashion a tyrant whom we are all forced to obey?
fashion reflect personality
What influences fashion?
fashion surveys/results
how does fashion impact on parent/ teenage relationships
The development of personality, identity and social self
Teenagers are suseptable to friends
Conclusion
Research list
yerpp. shutup 9months worth of work i think its gonna be massive. :|noir. said:Sophie, thats a huge contents page
Mine is like this:
Log
Intro
Chapter 1: Buying Christianity
Chapter 2: What Would Jesus Do?
Chapter 3: Spreading The Word
Chapter 4: I Shop, Therefore I am
concluion
bibliography
appendix
my hypothesis is: that the commodifiation of Christianity is a manifestation of society's growing materialism.
you're looking at alot of things - and theres nothing wrong with that. but your topic seems really broad. are you focusing on a certain sex/age group?
Maybe you can combine some chapters together as you might be repeating things
Yeah i cut out a whole lot before so its pretty much the right now like 50 or 60 words over for central but log n that r right !teach77 said:You really do need to stick to the word limit. The Log, Introduction and Conclusion are supposed to be 500 words, and any more than 550 words is a very bad idea. The Central material must NOT be more than 5000 words. Markers ALWAYS know when a project is overlength - they spend hours reading these things, one after the other, and when a PIP is more than the specified length, they can easily tell - simply by how long it takes to read it and how many pages it is. Don't try to fool the marker with wider margins or a smaller font, either. You will be penalised if your project is overlength, as this is a sign that it is not well-structured. Don't take the risk.
As noir advised, just cut the crap.
Good luck to all Society and Culture students of 2007!
lol everyone is scaring me !sdaly said:omg thats massive! you need to cut down by say, well it should be 6500 althogether.. so cut half of it out! they wont even take care reading much of it if its too long, it shows you just blab on and dont really know what youre talking about, because itd be unnessary crap! (even though im sure its good.. but thats their thoughts!)
Sad Statue said:My PIP is 23,000 words. Is taht too long?
Because it is all really good.
Except for the chapter that repeats "Burn Board Of Studies" over and over.