2024 HSC Chat (46 Viewers)

[Legendary16]

what was your feedback? I feel like a lot of kids talk too much about the prescribed text in the reflection and not enough on the text that they wrote

So I had forgotten to link my prescribed text in the introduction, and the other comments were on clarity and being specific. I do think I need a completely different structure

 

[fijifrotter]

for the most part they are negative. i can appreciate him as an actor and appreciate lfr in some aspects but i think ultimately hes a prick trying to affirm his own status as an actor/director. I hate his treatment and dismissal of women in lfr A LOT

pacino really wasnt a feminist and its bugging me!

 

[radioheadfan42]

I mean a 7/10 is still really good in my eyes! So even if you used the same one, it wouldnt be too drastic.
Be sure to sprinkle in a bit of personal voice…for me i usually follow the (very loose) structure of:

“i wanted to craft a text that /exposes/highlights/explores (xyz). I found that (perscribed text) effectively/skillfully etc did this through the use of (literary technique/structure), so i utilised this same technique in order to acieve this same effect. This can be seen when i (extract from your text)”
Of course thats not a strict or exhaustive guideline, thats just what i think whenever i write reflections. You may also want to mention where you could have improved…although im not sure of weather thats neccessary id have to check marking guidelines, take this with a grain of salt!

OH YES AND OF COURSE quote your perscribed text too! Or dont…depending on what the technique is. Like if your perscribed uses, lets say, personal pronouns i believe its ok to just say “I”, or if its split up or arranged in a certain way, it would be hard to exactly quote that without using the entire text. Lol.

 

[Solarised]

For those who know i am 40% complete on the creation of the virus

 

[Legendary16]

I mean a 7/10 is still really good in my eyes! So even if you used the same one, it wouldnt be too drastic.
Be sure to sprinkle in a bit of personal voice…for me i usually follow the (very loose) structure of:

“i wanted to craft a text that /exposes/highlights/explores (xyz). I found that (perscribed text) effectively/skillfully etc did this through the use of (literary technique/structure), so i utilised this same technique in order to acieve this same effect. This can be seen when i (extract from your text)”
Of course thats not a strict or exhaustive guideline, thats just what i think whenever i write reflections. You may also want to mention where you could have improved…although im not sure of weather thats neccessary id have to check marking guidelines, take this with a grain of salt!

Thank you so much for that...what do you recommend in terms of a possible word count (I know it would amount to 500 max, but how much detail should be required for my work compared to the prescribed text )

 

[TheLastHope]

Interesting...mine isn't too different because its about a guy who through music, reminisces his past experiences of a relationship and how their breakup affected his psyche, and then finding solace and a moment of clarity from the natural world

similar to mine lol

 

[et1cs]

For those who know i am 40% complete on the creation of the virus

when do you begin human trials…

 

[TheLastHope]

@hscccc, out of curiosity, what are your thoughts on pacino?

fuck that guy!

 

[igor9]

fuck that guy!

that's what i like to see, i didn't even watch the movie lol so idk what u mfs are talkin abt

 

[Legendary16]

when do you begin human trials…

I VOLUNTEER

 

[Solarised]

when do you begin human trials…

I did start a while ago but lost three lab members so yea

 

[radioheadfan42]

Thank you so much for that...what do you recommend in terms of a possible word count (I know it would amount to 500 max, but how much detail should be required for my work compared to the prescribed text )

There isn't exactly any rules per see...but I'd say that, because its a reflection, meaning its personal, markers are expecting that personal refelction/voice to come through. Its how you used your prescribed text, and whatever textual devices they use as a springboard for your own writing. Mod C is all about reflecting and considering the writing process personally, so id say a good chunk- going to say 70-60% - should be on your own text! Just be sure to back everything up with evidence though, while its a personal reflection its still largely critical. Eg, in the personal segments of the reflection be sure to mention how it helped convey whatever idea you wanted to convey with texual evidence from your own text.

How many words you do i reckon, depending on your writing speed, anywhere between 200-500. Though i usually don't think about word count too much when i write because i tend to go over the limit regardless, LOL, so i cant give any practical advice there!

Hope this helped at all

 

[Legendary16]

Thank you so much

 

[radioheadfan42]

Thank you so much

No worries at all!!

 

[et1cs]

mod c is doing my head in rn.. WHEN will i ever be required to do this again

 

[hscccc]

mod c is doing my head in rn.. WHEN will i ever be required to do this again

literally never again... never ever... yay...

 

[radioheadfan42]

In my reflection statement im just gonna say "its postmodern" and not elaborate whatsoever

 

[axe]

When we get our ATAR's on the 18th of December, would it be feasible for everyone to share it here? Because a bunch may not have achieved their target ATAR and seeing everyone with really good ATARs or people just being happy with what they got, will hurt a little.

fuck you im not doing that

 

[TheLastHope]

like anyone knows anyone here

 

[radioheadfan42]

I love saying everything is postmodern...made a spelling mistake? Postmodern, did it on purpose. Something i say makes no sense? Postmodern. Got the wong answer on a test? I did that intentionally actually its supposed to represent uhhhhhhhhh the uhhhhh postmodern uhhhhh