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    Personal voice in essays!? HELP!

    Ah yes i think i understand it now. So a personal response is just an essay with pronouns. :)
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    copying

    Exaclty. Cheating is cheating. As a general guideline, if you are unsure of whether you are cheating or not, then you are most likely cheating.
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    Personal voice in essays!? HELP!

    So...how are you supposed to write a 'personal' response in the third person? What makes it any different to just writing an essay? I always thought a personal response was just an essay where you use first person! The only personal response question i ever got I just wrote it like an essay...
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    Spelling variation

    I think its diegetic. Thats what im using anyway. Im sure the markers wont kill you if you spell it wrong.
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    sample responses

    Yes they do have them on the internet. Its in the link withoutwings provided. Zombie thread...
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    Structure of Harwood Essays

    I have found that integration doesnt work well for me with the Harwood poems. I generally integrate stuff, but i find that in this module in order to critically analyse a poem you should look at it as a whole. But you can still make links between the poems, eg: "Like 'The Violets', 'At...
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    raw marks for a band 6?

    Thanks for the info! I was a bit worried because I cant get more than 85% (usually much less lol) and I thought i needed 90% to get 90!
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    Creative writing title?

    Hey, Just wondering, do our creative pieces have to have a title? I have been told that we do need one, but I forget one every time and seem to ge pretty well, and ive read a couple of exemplar answers that dont. Thanks in advance
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    Critical Study: all about readings?

    Readings are an important part, but the focus should always be on the text itself in terms of themes, techniques etc. Your whole essay shouldnt be about readings, but the critics and readings should be integrated. For example, for gwen harwood: ''The violets' explores ageing and the passing of...
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    How many..

    They better not ask for two this year! They never have, but you never know... My first related text is really good, but my second is really crap...
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    Can You Take into an exam??...

    Should be fine. Ive got a mathomat (which I never use anyway!) which has the same stuff on it, and my maths head teacher said it would be ok.
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    Numbe of words in 40 minutes

    Definetly quality over quantity. My 40 minute essays are always a bit under 1000 words which fills one writing booklet. I always get 14/15 (and 19/20 for modules) I find thats all i can write in 40 minutes. If you can write more, go for it. But it is possible to get full marks with about 1000...
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    How many quotes?

    You are definetly not limited to a low band answer. The purpose of the historiography is to support your own ideas. It is more important that you present your ideas - historiography is just a way to expand on them. Its better to use your own ideas without historiography than just using...
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    No more Africans

    1) a) Yeah yeah, we 'all look the same' to people who arent black. If you're white and go to Africa or Asia they would say all white people look the same! (i know thats not relevant but I thought id add that.) b) Good point. I never thought of that! Although I wonder if that is actually...
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    what raw marks you need for band 5/6 (merged)

    Re: Anyone know what the raw mark needed for band 6 and 5 for chemistry for previous year This thread is very reassuring! I didnt realise it was that low, I always assumed you had to get around 90% to get a band six. Im not going to fail miserably after all :)
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    Ranked 1st = Mark not affected?

    Oh ok...that makes sense now. Thanks!
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    How many related texts?

    Last years journeys they asked for at least one. Just checked. And I have read exemplar answers that have only one related text without referencing any others. Though they did have a very good analysis of that one text. Personally I think its better to do one or two to ensure that you cover...
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    Ranked 1st = Mark not affected?

    Serious? Thats good to know. So if you come first in the HSC and internally, your internal mark will always get scaled to be equal to your external mark? And what about if your coming second? Will you be dragged down by those beneath you? What about if you are close to the first? Do they just...
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    No more Africans

    I dont remember where i read it, but it said , africans (and it named other ethnic groups too) perform fewer criminal offenses etc in terms of per capita, not just overall. It was an article from back when there was all the media attention about the Sudanese refugees up in Tamworth, but it wasnt...
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    Personality Essay Questions

    Hey, I was after some practice questions for the personality essay, and im sure others are too. Since they've changed the format of the exams to have one generic personality question to be answered on all of the personalities, most of the questions posted here on individual personalities are...
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