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but seriously, the average person does take stuff they read (especially about people they think they know) very seriously and think that its true. this happened to 2 of my friends - and i think it happens a lot more. the first did a speech about suicide - now people think she is suicidal...

the mimetic effect. read the RS zhongie - the mimetic effect, not the onomatepia (cant even spell it) unless of course it is and i have not even bothered to mention it coz i could not see it. i hope thats not the case... well thanks for the feedback much appreciated ciao

:( no one has given me any feedback *sobs* *gets over it really quickly* oh well who cares? as long as ppl are reading or have read or are planning to read mine i dont mind at all and if i get into the top band - i will be extremely happy although me and my teacher and Jan o'connor (me...

EE2 students’ (yes multiple) imaginations. All in all it was a tragic situation. And with bush re-elected – will the general public ever learn? Ah probably not, we’d all be better if we blindly followed our leaders…but Jan Doe would have none of that political talk and soon ended it before it...

...and Jan Doe was off on another wacky adventure - just like a certain yellow skinned family- but, of course, farrr more sophiticated - and banal - than THAT show could ever be. so after using her amunition Jan Doe realised that something was wrong. perhaps it was the fact that she felt so...

ok i have already posted mine up on the other thread however i havent recieved any feedback so im widening my audience here it is now im hoping that these are the right ones...

thank you soooo much for that tomorrows angel :D i wasnt going to go on today but i am glad that i did i cant read it now since i have to get ready for school and all that but i will and ill give u some feedback one other thing have u read mine>>>???? ok ciao

hey tomorrows angel! cant wait to read your MW i have read all 3 tales of the otori and i must admit that i did not know what u just said so enlighten me and post your MW already!!!!!

well i have just read urs zhongie and i must say it was excellent. what else can i say? i would like to read your reflection statement - although i do not think it is necessary for any exploration of the themes or content, structure purpose etc. but it would be interesting to see how you...

WELL I have just read ryan011086 set of poems - and i hope ur reading this! and i must say they were quite good i was a bit sceptical in the first few but the way you have utilised this medium is quite impressive. beatings had quite a bit of impact on me (not because there was any relation...

hey there glitterfairy. well i have jsut read your short story and may i say it was a really great story. but i do have a few problems with it firstly writing a story with the protagonists as yr 12 HSC students kinda stupid and risky and very cliched. sorry but it is. however, despite that...

A D-I-Y manucure set by a mysterious woman named Jan Doe. Entranced and enticed he asked her to the 70s disco party – mainly coz he knew he had nothing to lose and realised that since he was the main character he would (naturally) get the girl.

hey there i have downloaded each MW cept for 1time4theppl (i cant get zip files) Neway i have read a few MWs and heres my feedback 1st of all, all of them were really quite good - ok brilliant. Glycerine - quite impressive, i love buffy (and of course angel) and the way you looked at it...

are there any rural kids who got good marks???? i mean i got 36 (3rd out of 4 - but im rank 4th overall) the last got 33 2nd got 43 1st got 46 really? is this bad?????? one other thing - anyone doing past HSC papers??? if so Q6 (v) in the 1994 HSC - did anyone do it like they did in the...

…and john, living, breathing, tumbling, turning, churning john was there, far away from any tsunami but in the midst of contemplating on what to do with this cyclone. “Now I just cant stop it” he thought to himself but then the foolish old man’s words reached – how he did not know, nor...

i finally got the title of my work done!!!! its called ...one day... it reflects really well with my MW and there is also another notion of a continuum with the elipses before and after the words (i could have explored it in my RS but if the markers cant see it well thats my tough luck but i...

no i finished a while back...im one of the "good" people but on the day i handed it in my teacher was sick so i had a minute or two of freaking out but it all came together at the end please keep in mind i had the trials finished a bit over a week till this was due so i did a lot early on - i...

...a creature at once seen yet hidden. An anomaly that defied description, John’s eyes seemed to slip away from the creature as soon as he tried to focus on it. Strangely enough there was no fear within John, it was bowed by the sheer strangeness that his mind encountered. Soon he realised that...

i dont think i have ever been a good writer - i dont think i ever will be - however, i now know that i can write a story (regardless of whether its good or bad) on pretty much anything - although i have realised that i need a lot of time to actually learn and improve on my work to get it up to...

hey everyone i just downloaded your MW's - yeah i know im a bit late but i didnt realise till today so dont hate me! lol neway here is my MW so for all of you's who read some of my other posts you finally know what i was talking about - if you understand what i write that is. BTW its...